Rajveer, some detailed comments here and some consideration of effects achieved. Your comments are at times generic and you need to avoid grouping them all together and simply stating 'they create tension'. You need to consider them more specifically and consider which particular sound effects/camera angles create which particular effect. Try and avoid just stating they create tension - this is too broad. Examples of techniques being used in particular screen shots/videos would help. You also need to include comments on editing. Add the work we did last Monday as this will help to add some detail and the work on sub-genres too. Proof read your writing.
Rajveer, some detailed comments here and some consideration of effects achieved. Your comments are at times generic and you need to avoid grouping them all together and simply stating 'they create tension'. You need to consider them more specifically and consider which particular sound effects/camera angles create which particular effect. Try and avoid just stating they create tension - this is too broad. Examples of techniques being used in particular screen shots/videos would help.
ReplyDeleteYou also need to include comments on editing.
Add the work we did last Monday as this will help to add some detail and the work on sub-genres too.
Proof read your writing.