See the comments below with reference to the overview and how to organise the analysis here. Your writing runs off the page at times - check this. Write in full sentences! You state that the 'jump cut links the darkness and the demonic creatures together' - but a normal cut would have also done this - consider the jump effect in more detail - what does it add? Keep an eye on typos - 'of' instead of 'off', 'venerable' instead of 'vulnerable'
Make sure you are indeed analysing 4-5 key scenes, not sure you have done that here. You also need to ensure you include an evaluation for each of these films analysed. What have you learnt? Were they successful? Why? Which particular features might you use in your own film? Which particular features will you discount? Why?
See the comments below with reference to the overview and how to organise the analysis here.
ReplyDeleteYour writing runs off the page at times - check this.
Write in full sentences!
You state that the 'jump cut links the darkness and the demonic creatures together' - but a normal cut would have also done this - consider the jump effect in more detail - what does it add?
Keep an eye on typos - 'of' instead of 'off', 'venerable' instead of 'vulnerable'
Make sure you are indeed analysing 4-5 key scenes, not sure you have done that here.
ReplyDeleteYou also need to ensure you include an evaluation for each of these films analysed. What have you learnt? Were they successful? Why? Which particular features might you use in your own film? Which particular features will you discount? Why?