Rajveer, a series of screen shots would help here so we can see what exactly you are commenting on. You need to consider the structure of the whole trailer - how has it been put together? How does it successfully reveal the narrative and how does it successfully persuade the audience to go and watch the film? You need to consider some key scenes here and look closely at the features used - how is it successfully doing what a trailer should do? Lacking comments on camera and editing. Proof read!
Rajveer, a series of screen shots would help here so we can see what exactly you are commenting on.
ReplyDeleteYou need to consider the structure of the whole trailer - how has it been put together? How does it successfully reveal the narrative and how does it successfully persuade the audience to go and watch the film?
You need to consider some key scenes here and look closely at the features used - how is it successfully doing what a trailer should do? Lacking comments on camera and editing.
Proof read!