Some consideration of your characters, Rajveer. You need to try and use more creative ways of presenting your material' don't just write everything. Could you use images of the actors who will play your characters? You might also wish to include information about their role in the film - what 'character type' will they be? Remember, the conventions you considered early on stated that there are certain 'types' of characters used in horror films so you need to consider which of your characters fulfils these roles. More background details and more information about their relationships would be good.
Better Rajveer, but would still benefit from images of the actors who will play each role. You also still need to consider the character type they are going to portray - their role in the film.
Some consideration of your characters, Rajveer. You need to try and use more creative ways of presenting your material' don't just write everything.
ReplyDeleteCould you use images of the actors who will play your characters?
You might also wish to include information about their role in the film - what 'character type' will they be? Remember, the conventions you considered early on stated that there are certain 'types' of characters used in horror films so you need to consider which of your characters fulfils these roles.
More background details and more information about their relationships would be good.
Better Rajveer, but would still benefit from images of the actors who will play each role.
ReplyDeleteYou also still need to consider the character type they are going to portray - their role in the film.