Great storyboard programme, and tells the story in some detail. You also need to consider your roles in more detail here. So, the person responsible for camera work need to consider which type of shots and angles will be used for the different frames. The person responsible for the editing needs to consider the transitions between each frame. The person responsible for sound needs to consider the use of sound in each scene, and the person responsible for the miss en scene needs to consider the location, props and costumes for each frame. This will then need to be added to the storyboards. You state that in one of the key scenes there will be a ghostly figure, but you need to consider how you are going to create this effect in more detail. You need to consider the relationship between the locket and the abandoned house - not clear at the moment and needs more thought.
You are missing your location ideas. Not much evidence of you testing your ideas with your target market; little evidence of your 'journey'. More creativity needed in the presentation of your work, Rajveer.
I see you've included details of each area, good but you also need a description of what is happening in each scene Rajveer. The key 4 areas have not been considered in the last 3 scenes. Get this sorted.
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Great storyboard programme, and tells the story in some detail.
ReplyDeleteYou also need to consider your roles in more detail here.
So, the person responsible for camera work need to consider which type of shots and angles will be used for the different frames.
The person responsible for the editing needs to consider the transitions between each frame.
The person responsible for sound needs to consider the use of sound in each scene, and the person responsible for the miss en scene needs to consider the location, props and costumes for each frame. This will then need to be added to the storyboards.
You state that in one of the key scenes there will be a ghostly figure, but you need to consider how you are going to create this effect in more detail.
You need to consider the relationship between the locket and the abandoned house - not clear at the moment and needs more thought.
You are missing your location ideas.
ReplyDeleteNot much evidence of you testing your ideas with your target market; little evidence of your 'journey'.
More creativity needed in the presentation of your work, Rajveer.
I see you've included details of each area, good but you also need a description of what is happening in each scene Rajveer.
ReplyDeleteThe key 4 areas have not been considered in the last 3 scenes. Get this sorted.