It's good to see you have posted the feedback from staff and you have also used your initiative and shown other people your film. I like the fact that you filmed their reactions as they were watching the film. Maybe this could be edited down so we can just see the clips where there is a reaction. It would also be useful for you to comment on this - do you feel they jumped in the right places? Did you feel they reacted in the way you wanted them to react in the places you wanted them to react? The questions afterwards again are useful, but I feel you answer the questions himself! Give the audience some time to think about your questions so they can develop their own answers. The fact that you jump in suggests your audience findings have been manipulated and controlled.
It's good to see you have posted the feedback from staff and you have also used your initiative and shown other people your film. I like the fact that you filmed their reactions as they were watching the film. Maybe this could be edited down so we can just see the clips where there is a reaction.
ReplyDeleteIt would also be useful for you to comment on this - do you feel they jumped in the right places? Did you feel they reacted in the way you wanted them to react in the places you wanted them to react?
The questions afterwards again are useful, but I feel you answer the questions himself! Give the audience some time to think about your questions so they can develop their own answers. The fact that you jump in suggests your audience findings have been manipulated and controlled.