WWW - You begin to consider conventions and use an appropriate layout and colour scheme. EBI - I'm not sure why you have included the bloody hand? How does this fit with the film's plot? The possession doesn't really signal a bloody death? Maybe this also needs to be considered more carefully in the film. I'm not sure why you have placed the extra R in the title so it reads 'her' vertically. There isn't a 'her' in the film? The font design also seems to present the idea of a slasher film, and the film is a paranormal film so your font doesn't really fit. You have used a lot of red, which suggests blood, but this isn't the main feature of your film so it doesn't really link and would be misleading for your audience. Why the time? Again is this significant to your plot in anyway? If it is then you need to make this more significant in the film because at the moment it's not explicit. The image itself needs to be more central to the poster - and I think you need to focus more on his face and in particular his eyes so it is clear that he has been possessed. Your strap line needs to be in a bigger font. Your credits need more work - at the moment there is one person who appears to have directed, produced and acted in it!
WWW - You begin to consider conventions and use an appropriate layout and colour scheme.
ReplyDeleteEBI - I'm not sure why you have included the bloody hand? How does this fit with the film's plot? The possession doesn't really signal a bloody death? Maybe this also needs to be considered more carefully in the film.
I'm not sure why you have placed the extra R in the title so it reads 'her' vertically. There isn't a 'her' in the film? The font design also seems to present the idea of a slasher film, and the film is a paranormal film so your font doesn't really fit. You have used a lot of red, which suggests blood, but this isn't the main feature of your film so it doesn't really link and would be misleading for your audience.
Why the time? Again is this significant to your plot in anyway? If it is then you need to make this more significant in the film because at the moment it's not explicit.
The image itself needs to be more central to the poster - and I think you need to focus more on his face and in particular his eyes so it is clear that he has been possessed.
Your strap line needs to be in a bigger font. Your credits need more work - at the moment there is one person who appears to have directed, produced and acted in it!