WWW: - Understanding of conventional features - Consistent colour scheme
EBI: - The film title needs some work, it needs to be enlarged so that it is more prominent and should be in a similar font to the fonts that you have used on different parts of the poster, could you use the font that is used within the film itself? - The image of the hand seems out of place. I know that you have placed it on the poster due to the particular scene within the film but it needs to be much more implicit - consider whether it is really necessary for it to be on the poster and how you can make it more implicit - Why is there a camera time at the bottom of the poster? This doesn't link with your film as there are no obvious handheld camera scenes - Keep the consistency of the word 'he' in red by changing the colour in the word 'there'
WWW:
ReplyDelete- Understanding of conventional features
- Consistent colour scheme
EBI:
- The film title needs some work, it needs to be enlarged so that it is more prominent and should be in a similar font to the fonts that you have used on different parts of the poster, could you use the font that is used within the film itself?
- The image of the hand seems out of place. I know that you have placed it on the poster due to the particular scene within the film but it needs to be much more implicit - consider whether it is really necessary for it to be on the poster and how you can make it more implicit
- Why is there a camera time at the bottom of the poster? This doesn't link with your film as there are no obvious handheld camera scenes
- Keep the consistency of the word 'he' in red by changing the colour in the word 'there'