Friday 28 April 2017
Thursday 27 April 2017
Wednesday 26 April 2017
Tuesday 25 April 2017
Monday 24 April 2017
Sunday 23 April 2017
Saturday 22 April 2017
Friday 21 April 2017
Review: Potential Final draft Review
This is my potential final poster review, after a final check from both my specific target audience and teacher will it be uploaded as my final film review draft.
Thursday 20 April 2017
Review: Horror film alternative double page spread (Negative film review)
After feedback from both specific target audience and teachers, my first decision was to change to a double page spread and secondly was to become a negative rather than positive review. This allowed me to use language tools such as rhetorical questions, speech, short and long sentences and alliteration more often. Furthermore, I inserted more images and spaced out my work.
WWW.(Teacher)
-Language is more effective.
-Title much more identifiable
-Sub-heading eye-catching
EBI.
-Spelling errors
-Grammar
Wednesday 19 April 2017
Review: First attempt at single page review
WWW. (Teacher)
- The use of the mirror effect on the R is well done.
- Link between the image and text is done well.
- Language skills such as alliteration very well done.
EBI.
-For my first attempt, I felt that a single page positive review is the best way although I was told that the text appears to overwhelm everything else upon the single page review. For this reason a double page review may be a better option.
-Secondly the title of the film is not large enough to be seen.
Thursday 6 April 2017
Monday 3 April 2017
Review: Potential images
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