WWW. (Teacher)
- The use of the mirror effect on the R is well done.
- Link between the image and text is done well.
- Language skills such as alliteration very well done.
EBI.
-For my first attempt, I felt that a single page positive review is the best way although I was told that the text appears to overwhelm everything else upon the single page review. For this reason a double page review may be a better option.
-Secondly the title of the film is not large enough to be seen.
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