After feedback from both specific target audience and teachers, my first decision was to change to a double page spread and secondly was to become a negative rather than positive review. This allowed me to use language tools such as rhetorical questions, speech, short and long sentences and alliteration more often. Furthermore, I inserted more images and spaced out my work.
WWW.(Teacher)
-Language is more effective.
-Title much more identifiable
-Sub-heading eye-catching
EBI.
-Spelling errors
-Grammar
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