The comments on the audience feedback is more relevant for question 3 so take this out. You do make clear links between your film and your poster and review, but again, as with the previous response, I want to see evidence of this. So you will need to take screen shots from your film and then screen shots from your poster/review and explain which features have been used and manipulated to link and why you have made these particular links. You could also do with commenting on features you have used that are less obvious - more subtle links you may have incorporated. You need to have a clearer idea about how the poster and the review link as well as how they both link to the film. For example: think about how the image on the poster links to the title of the film - and then consider whether you have made mention of this entity or that particular scene in your review - consider why you felt this particular entity was so important to all three products and how you have maybe manipulated the entity in each of the three texts so although it's the same idea, it's slightly differently presented in each one - why have you done this? It might also be an idea to consider how previous research of a same film used certain features to link all three of their products - which links were evident and how did you incorporate this into your three products?
The comments on the audience feedback is more relevant for question 3 so take this out.
ReplyDeleteYou do make clear links between your film and your poster and review, but again, as with the previous response, I want to see evidence of this. So you will need to take screen shots from your film and then screen shots from your poster/review and explain which features have been used and manipulated to link and why you have made these particular links.
You could also do with commenting on features you have used that are less obvious - more subtle links you may have incorporated.
You need to have a clearer idea about how the poster and the review link as well as how they both link to the film.
For example: think about how the image on the poster links to the title of the film - and then consider whether you have made mention of this entity or that particular scene in your review - consider why you felt this particular entity was so important to all three products and how you have maybe manipulated the entity in each of the three texts so although it's the same idea, it's slightly differently presented in each one - why have you done this?
It might also be an idea to consider how previous research of a same film used certain features to link all three of their products - which links were evident and how did you incorporate this into your three products?