What is 'it' referring to? Firstly, it conducted research? More information needed about the initial questionnaire. Maybe consider some of the questions you asked initially and why these questions were important - again screen shot evidence of the research. You then need to consider what feedback you received from this initial questionnaire and why and how this informed decisions you then made. You're being too vague at the moment - my 'general' audience gave me feedback on 'general' ideas - what exactly did you learn from this feedback and how did this help you to move forward? Again, you should already have this on the blog - you were asked to do this at the time - comment on what you have learnt from the feedback and how you would then use it. Just go back and find it. You are simply telling me where you got your feedback from at different stages of the process - this is not what you need to do. I want you to identify some actual examples of feedback you received on each of the three products - again you can just go back through your blog and screen shot these. Then you need to explain and again show me, how you made use of that feedback - again with screen shots of improvements you made and an explanation as to why you made those improvements - again, you should have already done this. Again, the idea is that much of this work should have already been done so you just need to go back and find it.
What is 'it' referring to? Firstly, it conducted research?
ReplyDeleteMore information needed about the initial questionnaire. Maybe consider some of the questions you asked initially and why these questions were important - again screen shot evidence of the research. You then need to consider what feedback you received from this initial questionnaire and why and how this informed decisions you then made. You're being too vague at the moment - my 'general' audience gave me feedback on 'general' ideas - what exactly did you learn from this feedback and how did this help you to move forward? Again, you should already have this on the blog - you were asked to do this at the time - comment on what you have learnt from the feedback and how you would then use it. Just go back and find it.
You are simply telling me where you got your feedback from at different stages of the process - this is not what you need to do. I want you to identify some actual examples of feedback you received on each of the three products - again you can just go back through your blog and screen shot these. Then you need to explain and again show me, how you made use of that feedback - again with screen shots of improvements you made and an explanation as to why you made those improvements - again, you should have already done this.
Again, the idea is that much of this work should have already been done so you just need to go back and find it.